So A Killing Truth is out (yay!) and early feedback is encouraging, which is a huge relief. Why, you ask? Because the book is a prequel and had two enormous tasks:
1: it had to hew closely to everything I’d written about Leine’s early life in the other books (my thoughts of which tended to be along the lines of Oh, holy crap, what was I thinking???), and
2: it had to strike the right tone and not be just a rehash so that readers of the series would still be intrigued enough to read it. Aka: Reader Expectation.
Okay, so let me dig a little deeper into the first seemingly insurmountable task. As many of you know, my writing process is a hybrid of sketching out a rough outline combined with a seat-of-your-pants, cross your fingers and hope for the best, kind of style.
But I wasn’t always that organized 🙂
For example, when I wrote Serial Date, most of that novel came out in a torrent of mad writing sessions with a freaky dream as the catalyst. It’s filled with all sorts of, “Hey! Let’s make Leine loath tattoos. Why? Hell, I don’t know, maybe something happened in her past.” Followed by, “Well, what happened? I know! It should have something to do with an old target named The Frenchman, who of course almost killed her.”
And do you think I left it at that? Nope. Then I had to think of a reason that Leine and her old boss were no longer on speaking terms-the reason she left the Agency and ended her career as an assassin. What could Eric (her boss) have done that was so heinous that she should have killed him off? And why didn’t she? So I created what I thought would be a good explanation and left it at that. But I hadn’t thought through the logistics because I didn’t have to.
You know, because the book was going to be a standalone.
Bonus writing tip: Always think of the book you’re currently writing in terms of an over-arching series, even when it’s not. Because dollars to donuts, if you don’t, it will become one, guaranteed.
Okay, so readers wanted more Leine and I was happy to oblige, but I wanted to tackle current issues. Although the subject of Serial Date is reality shows, which is a current phenomenon in our culture, the book has an irreverent, satirical tone and I couldn’t figure out a way to satirize human trafficking without coming off as an asshole.
You see my dilemma.
So, I changed the tone of the second book (Bad Traffick) to hard-hitting, traditional-ish thriller and we were off! (Bonus writing tip #2: Always think of the book you’re currently writing in terms of an over-arching series. This includes consistency in tone.) I added a few more details to Leine’s backstory throughout the next three books, this time with the idea that I would someday write a prequel.
And here’s where it gets gnarly. The horrible transgression Eric committed was having Leine do something she would never, ever do if she knew all the details.
Leine’s a smart woman. In A Killing Truth, she’s at the top of her game as an assassin and takes pride in eliminating the worst of the worst. Eric had to make sure she was off-balance and would more likely make a mistake, or at least not be aware of his duplicity, which could royally mess with his plans.
Luckily, after much tooth-gnashing and pulling of hair, I was able to craft a realistic scenario that would incorporate all the little clues my subconscious had deposited throughout the series. I even had a couple of aha! moments that I surely didn’t see coming. Which brings me to Task #2.
The only way I knew to be sure the story matched or exceeded reader expectation was to write a fast-paced, explosive plot, with Leine as the central character. Yes, she’s younger and a bit less damaged (until the end), but the narrative tone is still vintage Leine, ensuring that longtime readers of the series won’t be disappointed.
I refuse to post spoilers here but if you’ve read Serial Date, you’ll have an idea of the heinous thing Eric has Leine do in A Killing Truth. And since I’m not a fan of back story in my novels you’ll also learn a whole lot more about her early life. And, as promised, I reveal why the hell Leine hates tattoos.
Go ahead and read A Killing Truth and tell me what you think. Do you enjoy reading prequels? If so, which ones really nailed it in terms of story and tone? If not, why not? Inquiring minds want to know.
Polly Iyer says
Brave woman, writing a prequel. You make me wish I had kept better notes, just in case. Best of luck with the book, DV.
Thanks, Polly. Makes me wish I had, too 🙂
I think you hit it, IMO. And great post.
Thanks, Laurie. It helps to have a stellar reader/editor like you 🙂
Elisabeth Zguta says
Good post. Writing a prequel sounds like a great way to tie everything together. Thanks for the advise on planning ahead. And so now . . . We know the rest of the story 🙂
Thanks, Elisabeth. It was nice to be able to flesh out Leine’s back story–and interesting how it all came together.
Channeling Paul Harvey, by any chance? 😀
Elisabeth Zguta says
Yes – and now I dated myself 🙂
Sherry Fundin says
I had wanted more of her story and wondered how It would play out. Would I be disappointed? I think you accomplished all your goals for the prequel and more than met my expectations! Excellent job. Keep it up. After all, her story isn’t over yet 🙂
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Thank you! That means a lot coming from you, Sherry, since you’ve been along for the ride since forever. And no, Leine’s story isn’t over yet, not by a long shot 🙂
Just downloaded it…in time for a little bedtime reading. 😀 And I so know about those little sub-conscious clues the end up being HUGE. Very much looking forward to this.
The subconscious mind + the act of creating fiction. Such a cool process. The magic of writing 🙂
Enjoy the book!
It’s funny, I sometimes think that the less my conscious brain is involved, the better.
p.s. I’m at the part where Leine kills ‘Medina’ and I’m desperately hoping I’m wrong about what it means. Definitely the best one yet, DV.
I’d have to agree with you, AC. The more I allow the writing/ideas to flow naturally, without shoehorning the things in that my conscious mind thinks should be there, the better.
Glad you’re enjoying the book 😀
Great post! I can certainly relate to your ‘style’ of writing. I have a basic story arch – only because I’m writing a series 🙂 and then I’m off and running…Let’s see what my characters are up to today….
Best of success with ~ A Killing Truth.
Thanks, Joanne. My outlining has morphed several times and each book is different. I outlined Cargo more than I did A Killing truth, but I still left a lot of leeway to change things. Makes it so much more fun 🙂